Tuesday, March 22, 2011

Rewrite of Ending

Epilogue

Beep! Beep! Beep! That was the signal of a new day and for the assigning of a new mission. Reynie and Sticky were both excited for the new mission, yet they decided to stay in bed any way. In fact, everyone was late for breakfast which is where the great assigning was supposed to take place. Instead it took place in Mr. Benedict’s office, which was fine because even though the dining room was more comfortable, Mr. Benedict’s office was more formal. The only kid that wasn’t hyperactive about this little meeting was Constance. Which wasn’t surprising about her considering she was up all night.
“Now that I see that you are all here I can start our mission conference,” Mr. Benedict said in groggy voice. “Your mission is simple, have a good time on your vacations! Although you will have to do some work, I would like you to do some research, and don’t get rusty in field work either. I will also send you a letter two months into your vacation. I hope you enjoy yourselves.” All but Constance’s mouths dropped wide open.
“Wow I can’t wait to tell Miss Perumal the news!” Reynie said with wry grin on his face. Even though Reynie was jovial about his vacation he had no idea that Mr. Benedict would of gave him such a task although it wasn’t really a task. Who would of thought that Mr. Benedict would have given such absurd mission. Reynie thought to himself deeply, he was locked into a deep state in which could not be easily disturbed. There was almost no way to get his attention at all.

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Even well into Reynie’s six month vacation he rigorously thought about what Mr. Benedict had said. When he got the letter he finally stopped freaking out and started to have a joyous time on vacation with miss Perumal and her mom. He studied the paper carefully until he memorized every single word. Who knows it, could it could have been useful to him.

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“Kate, are you trying that Houdini trick where you swallow a key?”
“ No dad I’m not trying that trick again,” Kate replied. Out of no where a key sputtered out of her mouth on to the floor.
“Kate I told you that maneuver was dangerous and you would kill your self.” Buzz! Buzz! Buzz! “ I’m being called for a mission, bye Kate!” Even though Milligan was wiser than Kate, Kate did not take Milligan’s advice. Miraculously she didn’t choke to death.

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Sticky was having a spectacular time with his parents. He had absolutely no worry in the world except for one thing, he was very ill with the flu for a couple weeks. The Washingtons’ vacation was delayed but they still were okay for the time being. Sticky felt sorry that his parents didn’t have as much fun as they could have had. Yet he felt sorry for himself but he could not determine why he was feeling this way. It upset him so much that he didn’t know why he was sorry for himself. He did have a good vacation despite his minor difficulties.

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There were not many miserable things that Reynie encountered during his vacation, one thing was that Reynie had to walk 30 miles to reach his destination of Kate’s house. He had to endure blisters on his feet because miss Perumal’s car had broken down. As the sunset was slowly waning into night, Reynie noticed a hawk circling above him. Even though he was getting scared to death, he was brave and kept on walking.









To Be Continued…..

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